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Shatter, shatter
Crash, fall
I once was on your pedistol
I was a puppet porcelain doll
Knocked against the marble floor
Always coming back for more
Broken pieces
Of my broken soul
A secret that has never been told
Missing a piece of my face
Somewhere in the empty space
Did you push me?
No, I jumped
Shattered shards stuck inside me
Cracks running all over me
Feathered wings moult and rot
An angel is something I am not
My porcelain heart is shattered stone
Controlled by diamond bits of string
Everything? Something? Anything?
Nothing
You promised me a thousand things
So once I took that broken fall
I was no longer your perfect doll
Now I breathe and now I bleed.

(c) Mikouya
©2005-2009 ~Mikouya
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Author's Comments

Wow. I was angry.

My friend told me to modify this poem a bit, so I did.

I'm really proud.

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:iconp-u-r-i-n:
=D Thats really cool!

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:iconmikouya:
Thanks! It was pretty fun to write XD

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~*~Mikouya~*~

When you laugh, I laugh.
When you cry, I cry.
When you jump out of a window...
I laugh.
:iconp-u-r-i-n:
Then fun happy smiles all round. =D Yess.... You're welcome, i mean.

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:iconicyrose:
thats really good!! you should write some more its awesome!!

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(") (") Monkeys make me Smile :D
:iconjinjahpaws:
good job! i may fave this.... i'de really like to see how you wrote it before as well.

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"Sticks and Stones will break her bones,
But names will break her spirit"

My website go 2 it, and u recive chocolate : [link]

ummm told to post : 98% of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot.

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